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[PJ]

I am trying my hand at sports writing. Below is a link to my first published article. Please give it a read. Feel free to debate it, comment (good or bad) or send me feedback. Right now its just hobby writing but who knows where it may go. I really want to improve, thanks in advance for the reading it.

NHL Hall of Fame Case for Detroit Red Wing Goalie Chris Osgood | Bleacher Report

 

[mick]

nice article PJ...........i'd ask a few writers in the same field for their feedback;
think that's where you'll find your best constructive criticism.

hockey trivia: where is the United States Hockey Hall of Fame?

 

[MM]

hockey trivia: where is the United States Hockey Hall of Fame?

It know it's in Minnesota in Evideth or something like that...it know it's about halfway between Duluth and International Falls

I'll give the article a read later PJ

 

[mick]

rite on mike.........eveleth; nice to brag about having it up here, but
way overdo to be moved to a more central location.........i think the east
coast is probably producing more quality high school/college hockey players
than the midwest anymore.